DESCRIPTION

shortydark · Post by **shortydark** » Tue May 29, 2007 8:06 pm

Saw a few peopelz posting they work here..thought i'd post some of mine..let me know wat ya think

DESCRIPTION

So strong, so pure
Confident and sure
Playful but mature
Vulnerable yet secure
Baby rest assure
My love is only yours

Soft spoken and sweet
Modest and discreet
But don’t let that deceit
Perfection from head to feet
Your part of the elite
Once again I repeat
You make me complete

Heart so kind
Educated mind
Eyes that shine
Body so fine
All that combined
And you're already mine

Beauty from skin to bone
Sexiness in your tone
Stand on your own
Yet your need for me is shown
Our love for each other is known
Our names are already written in stone

Resurrected me from dead
And made me smile instead
Now got me looking ahead
Our love speaks even if words are unsaid
Love you till death
Make you smile till my last breath

check out more of my work at http://www.amzadslife.blogspot.com

-MissS- · Post by **-MissS-** » Tue May 29, 2007 8:08 pm

Beautiful

Maliya · Post by **Maliya** » Tue May 29, 2007 9:27 pm

wow..thats so cute!!

cuzzy · Post by **cuzzy** » Wed May 30, 2007 11:25 am

aww thats really sweet
visiting that link - you got some talent (Keep it up!)

Menace · Post by **Menace** » Wed May 30, 2007 2:49 pm

likin ya poems keep it up

shortydark · Post by **shortydark** » Thu May 31, 2007 7:36 pm

thank u guys...feel free to leave comments on da site too....holllaaaa

Brown Eyed Beauty · Post by **Brown Eyed Beauty** » Fri Sep 28, 2007 12:50 pm

Wow, that's really heartfelt.. nice one (Y) x