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Senorita
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Post by Senorita » Mon Dec 25, 2006 9:50 pm

(b)Desire of the heart(/b)


I had a change of heart
I don?t know where to start

When my dreams aren?t always real
And what I think isn?t what you feel

When things become clear
And I waste every single tear

In those lonely nights,
Flying fantasies like kites,

As birds may come and go
They fly high and they fly low

And as you search for the broken wing
Your thoughts are always left reeling

Over what might and could have been
And for that one thing you were always keen

Although the broken wing is gleaming
But your concern is not her feeling

Although you passed her courage and insight
Your thought of wrong was always her right

As time did pass and distance shortened
And free will is what curtained

The inner laughter flood her heart
And wishes till death due us apart

Grew more and more as those words spoken
And she retrieved as if her token

Then as what you saw became known
With what the others longed to own

Distance grew rather than less, more
And your concern for her became poor

After all that you had been through
She still found herself loving you

The bruises faded but the pain remained
But no feeling of hope reclaimed

She re-contemplated all in her mind
And came to think you were too kind

All she did was forever wrong
And this she felt all along

With this she feels will remain the same
As you continue with your game

She waits and watches like she should
And hides it all, the best she would

Her desires are still deep at heart
Till death may due them apart

Is what will always flow her mind
Because true love is what?s kind

And then regardless of her wishes
The sea is full of other fishes

The sky is run by many birds
The books are filled with many words

But not enough words in books may run
To explain that love for him?s not gone


by rukaya


teme wah u finkk lol i was soo bored (A)
<b>You Must Carry A Chaos Inside You To Give Birth To A Dancing Star - Nietzsche</b>

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Post by Brown Eyed Beauty » Mon Dec 25, 2006 11:20 pm

all poems have a deeper meaning...
READ...
BETWEEN...
THE...
LINES...

from a fellow poet :P
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Post by AmIrRrRr » Mon Dec 25, 2006 11:30 pm

its really cool..you dont even have to be bored to write sumit like that..its really good... B)
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Post by Senorita » Mon Dec 25, 2006 11:44 pm

lol

yes ana

your right..read between the lines people :D
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Post by Sunnah » Mon Dec 25, 2006 11:46 pm

:( thas soo cuteee...mashallah u ass..soo beautiful kassam swear down rukaya!!! Ama use the las part for my msn name :P Mwah u Dog (L) :P
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Post by Menace » Tue Dec 26, 2006 12:19 am

ur poem sucked the worst poem ever i could've done better and i havn't even got a brain!! u suck! ahh i love lying :) it was good but seriously ur a geek myan u got bored so u wrote a poem!?! weirdo next time u get bored watch hollyoaks or summit

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Post by -mob- » Tue Jan 16, 2007 9:39 am

now that was heavvyy! alota meanin 'between the lines' there!

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Post by That_Kid » Fri Oct 05, 2007 4:27 pm

rukzzz loving the poemmmmm u gots talenttt

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Post by Brown Eyed Beauty » Wed Oct 24, 2007 12:19 pm

awh man i remember this :D
wow this could be made into a song uno..

*ahem just give me a minute to get my singing voice ready.. GLASS SHATTERS* oh dear..

lmao @ my "read between the lines" thing.. i can't remember what i was reading now :shock: hmm remind me sometime k :oops: Mwah x
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Post by cuzzy » Fri Oct 26, 2007 7:09 pm

*ahem just give me a minute to get my singing voice ready.. GLASS SHATTERS* oh dear..
^^ LMFAO Ana u funny gal :lol:

bit of a lateee reply but sick poem man sme deep words there :oops:

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