My Once In A Lifetime

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Menace

My Once In A Lifetime

Post by Menace » Fri May 18, 2007 8:11 pm

THIS IS FOR ALL THE GUYS WHO HAVE BEEN TOUCHED BY THAT ONE SPECIAL GIRL...THE GIRL THEY'LL DO ANYTHING FOR....THE GIRL THEY'LL RISK THEIR LIVES FOR...THE GIRL THAT ALWAYS COMES UP IN THEIR DREAMS....THE ONE GIRL THEY CARE ABOUT MORE THAN ANYTHING OR ANYONE ELSE....


I know for us things haven’t been going smoothly
Every few days we’d fuss and fight over stupid things
Everytime u would feel like I don’t want you anymore
I wish I could show you I want you just that lil bit more

Everytime I close my eyes all I see is you
But every time we argue you start to fade away
When you say you hate me and you’re leaving
You fade away just that little bit more

I know you don’t mean it but I still hurt
I’ve never been touched like this before
I’ve had people so close to me in my life
But none like you

Everyday I wait patiently till our first touch
But it never seems to come
So I wait one more day
Wishing we’d kiss today

It’s just so hard for me to leave you
So hard for me not to miss you
I wish you weren’t so beautiful
Wish I didn’t see you the way I do
Maybe it’d be easier for me to leave
Easier to wave my hand and say goodbye
Wish I could believe ‘us’ was all a lie
So I wouldn’t hurt so much when you turn away

I know you’d never go through with it
But baby I can’t take the chance
I just love it when you get mad
But sometimes I get scared too

Thoughts running through my head
Asking myself what if…?
What if I let you go would you ever come back?
What if I said I hate you would u ever feel the same?

I need you babe need you by my side
Think about you every night
Tossing and turning
Wishing you were next to me




There’s a few things, which I wish you’d stop doing
But there are a million things I wish you’d never change
Like the way you smile I wish I could just rewind
Play it in front of you and show you why I always want you to be mine

From the word get go I knew we would last
Being so far apart really didn’t matter much
Never even crossed my mind that it would hurt this much
But you’ve gotten in me and now I don’t ever want you to come out

I love it every time you call
And I hate to admit it but I love when you say my name
Love when you laugh and giggle
Love when you smile and tell me you love me
I just love how you make me feel
And baby I know I’m not the sort of guy you wanted
I know I hurt you when I don’t mean to
I know I’m a fool sometimes
And I never know what I do wrong
But baby never leave me without you my life will be dark and lonely
You’re my partner my shining light to guide me through the darkness
You’re the one I was blessed with to bring my life out of the sadness

And baby promises are never meant to be broken
So I promise to always love you
And I Promise to stand by you when things get hard
I Promise to never turn away when you need me the most
I Promise to give you the best I can
I Promise to never put anyone above you
And I promise to never look at another girl the way I look at you

I wish I was your strength and not just your weakness
I wish I could go past your mind and touch your soul
I wish I could make u feel the way u make me feel
I wish I could fill your heart with happiness
Wish I could wipe away your tears
Wish I could protect you from all the hurt
I just want to show you my love for you is real
Want you to know I’m here to stay and I’ll never go
You’ve taken over me baby
You’re the sweetest drug
I’m so addicted to you I can never get enough of you
They say you fall deeply and truly in love once in a lifetime
Well baby I got a confession to make…You’re my ‘once in a lifetime’

x EeYa x

omadais

Post by x EeYa x » Fri May 18, 2007 8:18 pm

I aint even lyingggg... this made me cry :-| ouchhhh :'( btw sick poemmm me love itttttttttttttt

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Post by samiiiRA » Fri May 18, 2007 8:25 pm

Awww thas well deep...propa sweet how yu've let yr emotions out in a poem~

Love the line where yu go 'I wish I was your strength and not just your weakness'

Nd the ending 'Well baby I got a confession to make…You’re my ‘once in a lifetime’

Very nice; enjoyed readin it :D

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Post by Platinum_Pwincess » Fri May 18, 2007 8:32 pm

Wow did u ryt dah? :| u goh som talent 8)

Ish shoo shweet :'( n yee da ending line was good :P

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Post by cuzzy » Fri May 18, 2007 9:09 pm

aww Menace that poem is FANTASTIC man i swear can tell words been poured out from the heart :oops:

'I know I’m a fool sometimes
And I never know what I do wrong
But baby never leave me without you my life will be dark and lonely
You’re my partner my shining light to guide me through the darkness
You’re the one I was blessed with to bring my life out of the sadness'


^^^ that had to be the best bit for meh i wanted to read more so deep
well done Menace :wink:

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Post by Sunnah » Fri May 18, 2007 9:17 pm

omggg ma babydoll wah a shweet poeem :( kasmeh it made me cry..and talkn 2 u online..im sittin here wit a dribbly nose..and tears cumin out of my eyes:( nabz im always here 4 u.!! and uno me il always look out 4yahh Bdw link up 4 sheesha 2moro kai? il cheer u up then mwahh xxxxxxxxx

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Post by xXxrukayaxXx » Fri May 18, 2007 10:34 pm

Omg...Menace.. that made me cry :(.. Always here for you, always have been ;).. really strong poem.. you got talent bro :D

Keep smiling love yoo x

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Post by xZubdax » Sat May 19, 2007 2:13 pm

i like it..
very touchy..
i was alsmot in tears.. keep it up!
good work!

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Post by Datty-Datty » Sat May 19, 2007 4:20 pm

Menace I am Speechless for once !!! :shock:

So meaningful and emotional :cry: U got talent!!! :D

Like i told u yesterdai if u eva need to talk u no where i am ok xx :)

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Post by snipa » Mon May 21, 2007 1:09 am

seriously brov onna level ting...dont take it hot buh i dont really understand poems and aint that fussd bout em...i dont understand what you are saying...mina mina... :? :? ...sos bout dat dude

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Post by Swehta » Mon May 21, 2007 1:12 am

awwwwwwwwwwww dat was sooooo adorable :( man in still crying as im typing dis ( after 10 mins) awwww i defo felt some of it :P n i love ur ending line :D heheh neways GREAT JOB :P i loved it :D

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Post by xxprincess-preciousxx » Mon May 21, 2007 1:21 am

omg seriouslu nabil this has got 2 me
its made me cry not a word of a lie :cry:
this is the stage im at now wiv my bf but its over anyways :(
love this poem soooooo much fanx 4 lettin me read it
luv ya loads
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Post by azngal » Mon May 21, 2007 8:10 pm

yo sik poems man kep it up mwahx

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Post by XxSoniaxX » Mon May 21, 2007 8:40 pm

Awwwwwwwwwww. Nice poem.:D Did u cum up wiv dat coz it's soooo good. neways tcxx

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Re: My Once In A Lifetime

Post by Brown Eyed Beauty » Sun Oct 28, 2007 12:06 pm

Menace wrote: It’s just so hard for me to leave you
So hard for me not to miss you
I wish you weren’t so beautiful
Wish I didn’t see you the way I do
Maybe it’d be easier for me to leave
Easier to wave my hand and say goodbye
Wish I could believe ‘us’ was all a lie
So I wouldn’t hurt so much when you turn away
^ That's truly amazing.

You words are really hard-hitting.. Wow i really felt something stab straight in my heart whilst reading that. Nabs you have a gift man thanks for sharing it with us xXx
The world's not getting smaller, there's just less in it.

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