I thought you wanted...

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That_Kid
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I thought you wanted...

Post by That_Kid » Thu Nov 08, 2007 2:19 am

damn baby it hurts
i gotta admit...its killing me..
..how did i get it so wrong...
see baby...i thought...i thought you wanted......

a guy that'd be there for you
you know the type that'd call u his boo
when he's around his friends he'll act the same
he'll treat you more than you were just another player game
a guy that wouldn't cut you off when you needed him
someone who'd brighten up your day when it was just starting to get dim
the type that'd watch you sleep for hours and smile
cuz you'd be the one thing in his life that made the pain seem wrthwhile
the type that'd make anniversaries special even when you were apart
a guy that would give you everything he had and not just his heart
someone who'd never let anyone speak bad about you
and when someone said something to hurt you he'd comfort you
tell you 'baby you're amazing, what they say aint true'
see baby that's what i thought..
i thought you wanted...
a guy that you could trust
a guy that'd show you what you had was love...not lust
someone who thought about you when he heard the word 'love'
and when you asked him what he saw in the future
he'd say 'i see me and you...together'
and he'd take your hand, kiss you on your dimple
and say 'you'll always be my baby angel'
then he'd say the words that made you smile 'you're iireplaceable'
and baby i thought you wanted the sorta guy
that whenever you got into a fuss and fight
he'd be the one to make the first move, hug you
and say 'i'm sorry baby everything will be alright'
the sorta guy who would base his dreams all around you
and remind you of those 3 special words 'i love you'
and he wouldn' just say it to please you
he'd mean every word he'd say
and when he told you many times over you were irreplaceable...
he meant it in every way...

that's what i thought you wanted...
how did i get it so wrong...
i gotta admit....it's killing me...
i'm sorry i was all of those things..

That_Kid
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Post by cuzzy » Thu Nov 08, 2007 2:23 am

ahhh That_Kid :wink: really wicked poems mate...deeply felt :D
you should consider publishing them uno :wink:

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Post by Rubies and Pearls » Thu Nov 08, 2007 2:29 am

im not into this whoel love deal
nor into postin lol but for u i makin exception :P

its godo stuff
deep
kinda cliche tho only wit the words u use liek 'boo" and stuff i mean i guess if written wit a better not slag word choice it wud be good

but u defo got talent so keep it up

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Post by That_Kid » Thu Nov 08, 2007 2:30 am

lol thanks cuzzyyyy and zoooooooooooooooooooooooo ya ya ya

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Re: I thought you wanted...

Post by Brown Eyed Beauty » Fri Nov 09, 2007 7:01 am

That_Kid wrote: someone who'd brighten up your day when it was just starting to get dim
the type that'd watch you sleep for hours and smile
cuz you'd be the one thing in his life that made the pain seem wrthwhile
the type that'd make anniversaries special even when you were apart
a guy that would give you everything he had and not just his heart
That_Kid wrote: and he'd take your hand, kiss you on your dimple
and say 'you'll always be my baby angel'
My favourite part of it ^ though all of it was really sweet tooo dont worry i'l make sure they get published =P then u gona have enough money to pay for one lil trip to London ;) hehe Mwaaaah x
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Post by That_Kid » Fri Nov 09, 2007 1:11 pm

lol ye a trip to london i've always wanted to go there to see.....the big ben :lol:

what were you doing on the computer at 6.00 am??

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Post by Brown Eyed Beauty » Sun Nov 18, 2007 11:43 am

i dreamed you posted a totally amazing poem on here and so i sleepwalked and sleep-logged-on here ;)
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